Soldier boy jack

on the whole its really good as before you need to work on grammar but i can't say much as my grammar is terrible as you can see but i ...

thanks again for the help but i'm going to blame it all on my English classes because we never get to work on grammar.

thanks roxanner but i normally write storys about boys as the main character and around my age but this time i wanted to push the boat out further

don't let people put you down keep trying and you will get there

Prologue: ( the last letter) (working title) i awoke with a start, i had just dreamed that i was falling again, but this dream was different from all the others ...

umm i love it what more can anybody say? never ever stop making great storys like this or everyone will get very bord lol

hi its a good story line (i say that because we both came up with it) but you really need to work on your grammar but other than that its ...

hi guys (and gals) just to say thanks for reading my very short prologue and i know i need to work on my grammar

Prologue: The closed window (working title) (updated a little) Dan stood in the open, window his heart racing, wondering if he would survive the night. Many dreadful, things were pounding ...

hi this is actually my story and my dream the person who uploaded it is helping me make it a good story (just so you know)